Friday, January 29, 2010

Left Hand Poems


Written on class...with the weaker hand...in only 30 minutes...these are the Left Hand poems of period 4 AP Lit.

4 comments:

  1. Here is my left-handed poem...I'm not sure if I like it, but here it is:

    Like a small flame I
    Steady myself.
    The gnawing pangs in my belly are crooning--this
    Is my debut--a shaking, undulating tremor lies

    In the cave of my throat, tensing with each
    Floating groan, like rope pulled taut and
    Straining against an unknown force.
    My dreams are crossed like the stars and

    Their meandering, inky paths in waves of lustrous
    Burnt silk--they are drowning in the waters of
    My less-whole brain, an orchestra whose instruments
    Have been stained with the whispering of unrest.

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  2. Like a small flame I,
    Steady myself
    Intensely aware
    as everything shifts.
    I am floating on

    a sea rolled by the wind.
    It is strange,
    as strange as a woman,
    burying herself.
    There is no sense

    of normalcy
    or of control.
    But there is nothing wrong
    with this state, where normalcy
    is drowning. Rather,

    I don’t worry. This experience
    opens a new direction.
    Like being born again,
    but with many secrets
    now revealed. Unsteadily,

    I enjoy the lack
    of familiarity
    and the alien world
    which it unlocks.

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  3. Here is my right-handed poem. Keep in mind I was really hungry when writing this:

    Like a small flame I,
    Steady myself.
    I try not to move.
    My mind is searching,
    scanning for the available.

    Dare I walk far?
    for it is only thirty degrees.
    Perhaps venture only a little,
    running the risk of long lines,
    and big bucks.

    The audience shifts in their seats,
    Anticipating my ever-important decision.
    Don’t worry!
    I will make a choice.
    My mind and stomach,
    fight back

    and forth. Back and forth.
    Oh how I have lost control of myself!

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  4. Here it goes...

    Like a small flame
    I steady myself

    From symbols to letters
    My pen runneth away

    I steady myself
    Practicing patience
    Light impressions waver
    Closer, morphing into letters
    Torn

    Between cursive and print
    I can't find
    myself
    Steady yourself

    Left ousts right
    Control, my heart
    aches
    Steady yourself

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